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| original sketch (Cain) |
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| Original Sketch (Keira) |
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| First iteration |
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| Second Iteration |
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| Final Panel |
The final page was born after a critique session, whereby after a few helpful suggestions I made changes to the first panel – splitting it into two that had been cropped to focus on the gun/ face of the character. This adds a much more cinematic feel to that page – with the changing focus of the ‘camera’ from the gun to Keira. I also made a few alterations to dialogue, reducing it and cutting some of Cain’s lines as they did not seem like how the character would act.
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